Worthy
indeed is the goal that Gillian Robespierre’s Obvious Child sets itself on: To honestly tackle the subject of
abortion from a female feminist perspective. Still a taboo subject in an
allegedly progressive Obama-era America, abortion’s portrayal on film – in
Hollywood or otherwise – is consequently rare. Indeed, aside from
made-for-television-or-cable movies, abortion is very rarely made the
centerpiece of American films. Whenever the subject is brought up in films such
as Juno or Knocked Up, it is quickly evacuated with the same uncomfortable
haste with which a show host might display in trying to get a particularly
offensive comedian off the stage before the crowd gets too angry. Knocked Up, for all its candid portrayal
of relationships and adult immaturities, was too afraid to even mention the word,
preferring to instead say that it “rhymes with shmashmortion”. So desperately
in need of authenticity in its cinematic depictions is this subject that Obvious Child’s ultimate inability to live
up to its own objectives is rendered all the more disappointing.
From the
opening credits, Donna Stern (Jenny Slate)
is introduced to the audience as a human avatar of what the film aspires to be:
A charismatic, abrasive stand-up comedian who derives her humour from demystifying
the female body with scatological jokes about sex and bodily functions based on
her own life experiences. Her best friend Nellie (Gaby Hoffman) even makes the point to spell out to her – and the
viewer – that the greatest thing about her is that she is “unapologetically
herself”. Almost every scene in the film’s first 15 minutes seems consciously
designed to incite the audience to like and relate to the protagonist: After
getting dumped by her cheating boyfriend, she spends the night getting
comically drunk and attempting to call him only to get evicted from her flat
the following day, forcing her to sleep at her father’s (Richard Kind); when she isn’t being told by her entourage what a brilliant
and funny person she is, she’s being chastised for wasting that brilliance. As
if to further make twentysomething Americans nod their heads in recognition,
she also has to pay off student debts.
It is
sufficiently annoying when mainstream films make visible efforts to forcefully
obtain their audience’s support of their protagonist; when allegedly independent-minded
films intended to provide more realistic and flawed characters soften their
blows by embellishing these flaws as elements to be admired through laughter instead
of accepted as they are, they demonstrate an unwillingness to take risks that severely
impairs their aim.
Aside
from the breakup-induced drinking that gets her pregnant during a one-night
stand with Max (Jake Lacy, who looks like
a slightly beefed-up Michael Cera), none of the aforementioned issues
ultimately matter. Her financial problems are casually mentioned from time to
time without getting any more relevant and her parents exist mostly to dispense
life advice and comfort at dramatically convenient times. This is one of Obvious Child’s major failings: In its endeavor
to subvert abortion clichés, it allows itself to wallow in romantic comedy
clichés and ends up losing on both fronts: None of the characters ever break
out of the prepackaged set of rules they’ve been assigned: The supportive
female best friend, the mother who appears somewhat cold and out of touch but
turns out to have more in common with her daughter than the latter suspected,
the gay male best friend whose sex life and love life is discussed but never
actually proven to exist… These characters have no true individual identity of
their own and remain firmly inside their boxes. Nellie does tease the possibility
of standing out among them when the topic of her own past abortion is brought
up, but never goes through with it.
Indeed,
the pinnacle of her characterization comes in the form of an indignant rant
following the suggestion that Max might deserve to know about the situation.
Asserting the priority of Donna’s needs over those of a man she barely knows,
she callously refers to the soon-to-be-aborted fetus as “that fucking thing”
and deplores the legislation of women’s vaginas by “a bunch of weird old white
men in robes”1. She later
reassures Donna that abortion doesn’t hurt apart from a few subsequent vaginal
cramps similar to period cramps, and that’s as far as we’ll ever get to know
her as a person. As for Max himself, Jake Lacy’s warm performance never manages
to transcend his character’s bland predictability. His everyman persona
presents opportunities for a broad range of emotions with regards to Donna’s
awkward interactions with him, her secrets and the eventual revelation of her
situation, but Robespierre squanders the most important of them. Max consistently
remains an idealized Nice Guy™, whose acceptance of Donna’s
pregnancy and plans for abortion is all the more remarkable in its unconvincingness
considering she reveals it to him during a stand-up routine for all to hear –
echoing the film’s opening, where her public jokes about her boyfriend’s penis
and their sex life, all while he was in the audience, accelerated their
break-up. Sure, his first reaction is to leave the room but he gets over it the
very next day, just in time to accompany her to the abortion clinic where they
can start their relationship on a new ground and get a hollow happy ending,
obtained with far too much emotional ease and contrivances to be believable.
Nobody really got hurt, nobody grew up organically.
This
pattern repeats itself throughout the film: Supporting characters appear, a
potentially uncomfortable situation is created only to be defused and quickly forgotten.
One standout is David Cross’s appearance as a fellow comedian who invites Donna
in his car just as Max was coming to see her in the club, setting up the detested
bane of romantic comedies that is the third-act breakup. David Cross’s
character shows a certain promise: A cynical comedian back from Los Angeles
after selling his first pilot who, despite talking to Donna as he would a
friend, still makes transparent attempts to seduce her – at one point
accidentally-on-purpose spilling wine on his shirt then returning with a woman’s
camisole that, combined with his rather full beard and hipster glasses, makes
him look like a cross-dressing gay Bear. He makes passes at her in a joking
tone that, rather than being creepy, hints at something theoretically
interesting. His words and actions appear motivated less by genuine lust than
by a desire to act upon a perceived lack of self-worth. Yet Robespierre
steadfastly refuses to make the scene uncomfortable to watch, choosing instead to
use comedy as a way to deflect pain and embarrassment rather than transcend it.
Donna leaves and David Cross is never seen again. Drained of all its potential,
the scene is reduced to little more than a time-filling plot contrivance.
Limited
as it is by its reluctance to make the audience uncomfortable, the courage of Gillian
Robespierre’s screenplay limits itself to making abortion its main subject matter,
taking an openly pro-choice stance on it and including explicit jokes and
discussions of women’s body parts and their functions. When it comes to more
subtle and potentially more frightening areas of human behaviour and feelings,
such as the process that led Donna to realize her own immaturity and inaptitude
at child-rearing, Robespierre plays it disappointingly, depressingly safe. The
conventionality of her writing is matched by her directorial choices: Jump-cut
montages of Donna getting drunk or writing on a bench, postcard-shots of New
York as a guitar plays trite indie music on the soundtrack, a color palette
comprised almost exclusively of warm colors… Less evident but all the more damning
is the poverty of Robespierre’s visual grammar: the majority of her shots are
static and framed up to the characters’ waists or chests with the occasional
wider, transitory shots. Lack of frame diversity isn’t necessarily in and of
itself a huge problem in narrative film if the shots are composed, assembled
and edited in such a way that there is always something aside from the general
events going on both within them and between them. In Obvious Child’s case, the scenes are filmed and edited with a
generic predictability that is completely at odds with both its subject and Robespierre’s
intended treatment of it. Only Donna and Max’s reunion in the library stands
out as an example of Robespierre exploring a visual element – Donna sitting in
a cardboard box – to its visual potential. As a whole, the film looks and feels
like a ready-made assembly line product with the Sundance stamp of approval on
it. It serves as proof, along with such similarly unadventurous fare such as 50/50 and Robot & Frank, that much of the so-called “independent”
American film industry is really just a lower-budgeted Hollywood with the same plastic
ideas and emotions.
Thankfully,
there are still remains of what the project could have looked like had it blossomed
into the acidic flower of subversion it was supposed to be, and most of them
are contained in Jenny Slate’s spot-on performance. Although most of Donna’s
stand-up jokes aren’t exceptionally funny (and
Robespierre’s attempts to convince the viewer otherwise through shots of the
audience laughing and smiling in appreciation and support do nothing to change
that), Slate imbues her with a disarmingly self-conscious corporal
expressiveness that communicates all her character’s feelings and impulses spontaneously.
Her nasal Brooklyn tones counter the script’s excessive attempts at garnering
sympathy by eliciting just the right amount of annoyance. Whether her lines are
funny or not, Slate never tries too hard to make them so. In fact, it is in her
more dramatic scenes that Robespierre’s direction manages to build up enough
strength to expose a few moments of truth to the screen. Would to Heaven that
she could have maintained that course for more scenes; perhaps a truly interesting
comedy about abortion could have come out of it in spite of the screenplay’s
inadequacies.
1If Nellie was referring to the Supreme Court, that’s not quite accurate:
As of 2014, of its nine justices, one is an old black man, one is a middle-aged
Hispanic woman, another is a forty-four year-old white woman and another still
is an old white woman.